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• 1、英语作文批改
• 2、四级作文求批改
• 3、求批改一篇英语作文 谢谢

英语作文批改

第一段引入话题，阐述和你相反的观点，第二段用一个转折引入你的观点，并找观点支撑你的观点
第三段总结
In recent years,many college students have some part-time jobs. some people consider that they should not get any (否定句里面不用some)part-time job，（不用句号，because链接两个句子）because their majoy duty is still study hard in order to pass the exams. if they take(不是用do吧，太中国化） part time jobs,their time will be shared and their study may be degraded.

In my opinion, 加你的观点 空闲时间多，避免浪费 用于看电视玩游戏， 提高学生能力，处理事情，合作精神，有利于接触社会，挣钱减轻家庭负担 等等
As far as I concerned, taking part-time jobs have many benefits,for example,例举一些。。。。for those reasons,we should encourage the students to take part-time jobs

剩下的自己修饰哈 套路就是这样的 这样更清晰明了，每段开头都要yoga那些老师教的套语 加分

四级作文求批改

73.5

词汇:

句子:

篇章结构:

内容相关:

评语：
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

1

Nowadays, eating food has
become a very common matter in the subway.

[教师点评]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: common, ordinary,
commonplace, general, usual, popular, universal 均含有“普通的，普遍的”之意。
common:
多用于指物，侧重很常见，不稀奇。
ordinary:
用于物，指每天发生，十分平淡无奇；用于人，指无特别之处，很一般。
commonplace:
强调缺少新意。
general:
语气强于common，侧重大多如此，很少有例外情况。
usual:
指常见常闻和常做的事或举动，强调惯常性。
popular:
指适应大众爱好、需要，为大家所公认或接受。
universal:
与general同义，但语气较强，侧重对每个人或事物都适用，根本没有例外。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely,
exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely
difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the
woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.

一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably
diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

1.2

There is a public debate
today over whether should food be banned on the subway.

[教师点评]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ban...food 在教材中出现过 28
次
SeeAlso: shun
food19

[学习提示] 易混词汇: controversy, argument,
conflict, debate, dispute, quarrel, strife 均有“争执，不和”之意。
controversy:
侧重指深刻的意见分歧，多指对引起广泛兴趣或非常重要的问题的辨论。
argument:
指辩论双方均以事实或理由来说服对方的辨论。
conflict:
指双方坚持已见、互不妥协，怀有敌意的争论，多暗示分歧极为严重，有时用语言无法解决，只得诉诸武力。
debate:
通常指经过仔细组织和计划的个人或团体之间的辩论。
dispute:
普通用词，侧重指长时间，言词激烈，针锋相对的争辩。
quarrel:
普通用词，既可指言词激烈的争吵，也可指温和的言词上的不和。
strife: 指因不可缓和的矛盾而引起的争吵或斗殴。

[批改提示] ban近义表达有prohibit/
forbid/ banish/ restrict/ interdict

2.3

Some maintain that food
should be banned on the subway because it may exert a great influence to other
people.

[教师点评]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ban...food 在教材中出现过 28
次
SeeAlso: shun
food19

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 exert...influence
在教材中出现过 931 次
SeeAlso: wield influence658,exercise influence287,maintain influence67

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions,
diet 都有“食物”之意。
food:
普通常用词，泛指一切能充饥和补充人或动物身体消耗的食物。
provisions:
指即时应用或储藏备用的食物或粮食。
diet:
指规定的或惯常的食物，尤指维持健康的定量或定质食物，也指疗养时规定的食物。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] ban近义表达有prohibit/
forbid/ banish/ restrict/ interdict

2.4

However, others believe
that we can eat food on the subway as lots of people don't have enough time to
eat breakfast at home.

[教师点评]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...breakfast
在教材中出现过 645 次
SeeAlso: feed breakfast22,consume breakfast4

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...food 在教材中出现过 2300 次
SeeAlso: consume food130,feed
food60,eat_up food6

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...time 在教材中出现过
34459 次
SeeAlso: take
time19113,accept time40

[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust,
confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。
believe:
普通用词，常表示一种缓和、不太肯定的口气。
trust: 指绝对相信或信赖某人。
confide: 侧重忠诚可靠与可信赖。
rely: 指在相信的基础上可进一步依靠，着重可靠性。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

3.5

As for me, I think we
shouldn't eat food on the subway.

[教师点评]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...food 在教材中出现过 2300 次
SeeAlso: consume food130,feed
food60,eat_up food6

[学习提示] 易混词汇: food, provisions,
diet 都有“食物”之意。
food:
普通常用词，泛指一切能充饥和补充人或动物身体消耗的食物。
provisions:
指即时应用或储藏备用的食物或粮食。
diet:
指规定的或惯常的食物，尤指维持健康的定量或定质食物，也指疗养时规定的食物。

3.6

Why I have the opinion like
this?

[教师点评]

[低频警示] the opinion like this
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opinion
在教材中出现过 2989 次
SeeAlso: have feeling7055,have
view4707,have thought1397,have notion844,have impression781,have belief733,have judgment260,have sentiment95,take opinion79,have ruling53

[学习提示] 易混词汇: advice, opinion,
proposal, suggestion, recommendation, view 均含“意见，建议”之意。
advice:
普通用词，侧重依据个人经验、学识和正确判断而提出的忠言。
opinion:
日常用词，泛指对某事物的想法和意见。
proposal:
指正式提出来供研究、采纳或实行的建议。
suggestion:
普通用词，语气比advice婉转客气，也不如proposal正式。着重为改进工作、解决困难等提出的建议，有时含所提建议不一定正确，仅供参考的意味。
recommendation:
指在自己经历的基础上而提出的有益建议、意见或忠告。
view:
侧重指对重大的或引起公众关注的问题所持的看法和态度。

3.7

Three factors can explain
this.

[教师点评]

[批改提示]
explain的近义表达有interpret。

[批改提示]
explain的近义表达有interpret或illustrate。

3.8

First, someone eats food
which has highly seasoned that let others can't bear it.

[教师点评]

[低频警示] season...let 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...food 在教材中出现过 2300 次
SeeAlso: consume food130,feed
food60,eat_up food6

[学习提示] 易混词汇: stand, bear, endure,
tolerate, suffer, abide, withstand 均含“忍受”之意。
stand:
口语用词，常可与hear换用，但前者侧重指经受得起，后者强调容忍，是普通用语。
endure:
书面用词，指长时间忍受痛苦和不幸，着重体力或意志力的坚强不屈服。
tolerate:
指以自我克制的态度，对待令人反感或厌恶的东西，含默认宽容意味。
suffer:
通常指非自愿或被迫忍受各种痛苦、困难或不快，强调受到苦难。
abide:
指忍受长期的痛苦或折磨，强调耐心和屈从。多用于否定句和疑问句中。
withstand:
指因具有一定实力、权力或能力而能忍受某种情况。

3.9

Second, subway is so
crowded that we can't eat food very easy which both harm the interests for self
and others.

[教师点评]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...food 在教材中出现过 2300 次
SeeAlso: consume food130,feed
food60,eat_up food6

[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy
均含“简单的，轻易的”之意。
simple:
普通用词，指不复杂、不难懂，从而容易被理解的事物。
easy:
普通用词，指不需要花费太多精力的工作或事，在实际运用中常与simple换用。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely,
exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely
difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the
woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.

一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably
diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

3.10

Third, someone even brings
drinks to the subway.

[教师点评]

[低频警示] drinks to the subway
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 bring...drink 在教材中出现过
46 次
SeeAlso: take
drink306,get
drink241,fetch drink18,bring beverage10,play
drink5

[学习提示] 易混词汇: bring, carry, take,
fetch, get, convey, transport 均有“带，拿，取”之意。
bring:
指从某处把人或物带到或拿到说话者所在的地点，强调方向，不着重方式。
carry:
指把物品从一个地方带到另一个地方，不涉及方向，只强调方式。
take:
指从说话人或说话人心目中所在处把某人或某物带离开，带到离说话者有一定距离的地方，与bring的方向正相反，侧重方向，不着重方式。
fetch: 指一往一返，相当于go and
bring，去取了东西或带人再返回到出发处。
get:
口语用词，与fetch基本同义，语气随便。
convey:
指通过中间人传递信息，或以某种方式把人或物送到目的地。
transport:
指使用车辆或机械设备把人或货物从一处运载到另一处。

3.11

If they are not on guard,
it's very easy to spill out.

[教师点评]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: simple, easy
均含“简单的，轻易的”之意。
simple:
普通用词，指不复杂、不难懂，从而容易被理解的事物。
easy:
普通用词，指不需要花费太多精力的工作或事，在实际运用中常与simple换用。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely,
exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely
difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the
woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.

一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably
diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

4.12

As far as I'm concerned, I
agree with we shouldn't eat food on the subway.

[教师点评]

[低频警示] food on the subway
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 eat...food 在教材中出现过 2300 次
SeeAlso: consume food130,feed
food60,eat_up food6

[学习提示] 易混词汇: agree, accord,
coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合，一致”之意。
agree:
侧重指经过比较后的所有主要部分均和谐一致，无冲突和矛盾。
accord:
着重指性格、精神、语气或质量等方面的完全一致。
coincide:
多用于指观点、判断、愿望、利益或兴趣的一致或相符。偶尔用于人，强调意见或观点完全相同。
conform:
强调在形状、性格以及主要特点等方面的相似或一致。
correspond:
指在进行比较时，两个事物在某一个重要方面或细节上互相匹配、一致。

求批改一篇英语作文 谢谢

1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover
[句子错误] 请检查Do，确认主谓一致。
1.2 Welive in a complex world.
[句氏返子错误] 请检查句中谓语动词。
1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.
[词语错误] 请检查terriblethings，确认拼写正确。
1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.
[词语错误] 请检查andcriminal，确认拼写正确。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击
1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.
[词语错误] 请检查twosides，确认拼写正确。
1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.
[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。

1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.
[词语错误] 请检查distingushing，确认拼写正确。运银
[批改提示] 查看旁核宴clearly与clear的区别。
2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.
[句子错误] 请检查do，确认主谓一致。

2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.
[词语错误] 请检查asimilar，确认拼写正确。

2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.
[其他] 请检查a data in library，本族语中很少使用。
[词语错误] 请检查myuniversity，确认拼写正确。
2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.
2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.

2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.
2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.
[词语错误] 请检查wasold，确认拼写正确。
2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!
2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!
2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.
[词语错误] 请检查itscover，确认拼写正确。

3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.

3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.
[词语错误] 请检查peopleeasily，确认拼写正确。
3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.
3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.
[词语错误] 请检查onlyby，确认拼写正确。
[批改提示] all kinds of的近义表达有a great variety of。
3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.
[词语错误] 请检查itcompletely，确认拼写正确。

4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
[动词错误] 请检查spend enough timeand energy to understand，确认动词用法正确。
[词语错误] 请检查timeand，确认拼写正确。
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