小编今天整理了一些四级作文陈述自己观点范文 (四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲,具体到某些点的,有些英语佳句进去更好!谢相关内容,希望能够帮到大家。
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求英语四级作文题目
四级作文预测
(恩波英语研究所)
(一)Fire Prevention on Campus
1. 前段时间校园火灾频发,造成生命和财产损失
2. 分析火灾发生的原因
3. 作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生
●审题概述●�
这是一篇分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写的重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段,主要概述;第二段,说明原因;第三段,详细论述措施。
◇第一段思路点评:
概述并引入下文
◇语言点提示:
(1)此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?常可作为过渡句,引出下文
(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如are alarmed by,were reported,were burned down,were damaged,Faced with。
◇第二段思路点评:
论述火灾的主要原因是使用热得快烧水,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂。
◇语言点提示:
electric water-heaters电热水器
◇第三段思路点评:
详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。
◇语言点提示:
take precautions采取预防措施
fire extinguisher灭火器
(二)Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识
●审题概述●�
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
(三)How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
● 审题概述●�
本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段,侧重简述网络给人们生活带来了多彩、便利。第二段,详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段,论述对网络依赖的观点。
(四)Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2. 引起此现象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 审题概述●�
本文是一篇论述大学生报考公务员人数增多的原因和对此的看法。第一段,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段,重点谈自己对此的观点。
我还有很多 要的话hi我
(五)Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班,有些人则认为没有必要
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●�
这是一篇主要论述对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段,概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段,论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法。
【范文】
Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialities like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.
Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than insert knowledge into our head.
As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.
◇第一段思路点评:
第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起,第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。
◇语言点提示:
(1)a great diversity of各种各样的
(2)mushrooming迅速扩散、增加
(3)language crash courses语言速成课程
◇第二段思路点评:
先用一个对比句式摆出两种不同的观点,再分别详述他们的看法。
◇语言点提示:
注意连接词语while,the former,they,the latter group of people等的使用,强化了上下文之间的连贯性。
◇第三段思路点评:
辩证地论述自己对参加各类培训班的看法。
◇语言点提示:
(1)as far as I am concerned我认为,就我而言
(2)counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的
(四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲,具体到某些点的,有些英语佳句进去更好!谢
引用
东方 的 【考试信息】2010年6月份大学英语四级考试作文最新预测--校园安全与生活压力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加,校园安全问题备受关注
2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题,提纲第2点要求提供解决办法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题,校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。
【参考范文】
Campus Security
Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?
On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。
In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。(总结观点段)
一篇关于校园治安,校园安全的英语作文
Electric door guard sparks debate (CRI)
The electric door guard has replaced the traditional "door lady" in a dormitory at Shanghai Songjiang University City, within the range of many universities.
In the future, more electric door guards will take the place of "door ladies."
The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding student's name, major, grade, and even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a "digital eye" to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week.
With the new "door guard" already on duty, students began to discuss the pros and cons of the latest renovation to their dorm in community forums.
Some complained that having to take their IC card everywhere is inconvenient, adding that the system is not always reliable. They noted times when the system failed to recognize them and they had to call repair workers to fix it.
Others say the former "door lady" was more flexible and gave them a sense of "home." Sometimes when a student had to stay out late, to study or for other business, the door lady would wait for them and let them in if they told her beforehand. Or when students' parents came to visit, the door lady would let them in. But now, all of these conveniences seem impossible.
Still, students admit that the electric door guard is much safer, as it prevents thieves as well as unwelcome salesmen from entering their dorm. In this way, the electric door guard has its own advantages.
The school's authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the inconveniences brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to be good for students living in the dorm building.
本文来自作文地带:
跟最近那些在校园发生的事有关的英语作文,字数略少,大家自己补齐!
Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.
Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.
From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识
审题概述�
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
【范文】
l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
第一段思路点评:
陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
语言点提示:
it seems that此句型表示一种可能性
第二段思路点评:
说明被盗原因
语言点提示:
(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识
(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕
(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
第三段思路点评:
阐述如何加强防盗意识
语言点提示:
注意关联词语in the first place,besides,In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。
2020年12月四级作文分析之沟通方式改变
2020年12月
四级作文
分析之沟通方式改变:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Communication. You should write at least 120 words but no
more than
180 words.
首先,通过仔细审题发现,今年12月份的四级作文真题之一是一篇比较典型的
议论文
写作,根据所给的文字提纲,我们需要写的话题是“沟通方式的改变”。
其次,确定为议论文之后,我们需要就这一主题,联系我们现代社会的交流和通讯方式所发生的变化,形成我们基本的写作思路。字数要求为120 -180字的议论文,我们可以采取总分总的结构,分为三段。
第一段为现象的陈述,叙述由于
互联网技术
的发展和手机的普及,越来越多的人开始依赖互联网和手机进行交流沟通, 越来越忽略面对面交流。
第二段可以展开讨论这种沟通方式的改变,也就是利用手机和互联网交流的积极和消极的影响。从积极方面来说,线上交流拉近了人们之间的关系,通过即时的通讯,人们可以随时随地沟通和交流,哪怕是距离遥远的朋友和亲人。从消极方面来说,一部分人会沉溺于线上交流,而忽略了面对面的交流,忽略了和身边人的情感交流。交流通讯方式的改变给人们带来了疏远感。
第三段我们可以承认通讯方式的改变给我们带来了好处,同时提出不应该忽略新的交流方式产生的消极影响。建议人们应该更重视面对面交流。
总体上来说,议论文的正反讨论有助于我们在写作过程中更全面地表达自己的观点,在结尾段承认和进一步发展的好处,针对消极影响提出建议。
范文
Nowadays, great changes have taken place in the way of communication. With the continuous advancement of science and technology, the mobile phone has become an indispensable tool in our daily life. People in mounting numbers indulge in the communication through mobile phones, becoming increasingly unaware of face-to-face communication and estranged from each other.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, online communication through the mobile phone and internet provides us with considerable convenience and enables us to be closer than ever before. For example, it is easier to for us to keep in touch with far-away friends and relatives. On the other hand, our reliance on mobile phones has negative effects on our personal life. People are so addicted to online communication that they ignore face-to-face communication. Although scientific and technological advancement brings us a number of benefits, it has provoked a sense of alienation among people.
In conclusion, enjoying the convenience provided by the new way of communication, we should bear in mind that human beings are social beings who need real interpersonal interactions. Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication.
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