小编今天整理了一些(四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲,具体到某些点的,有些英语佳句进去更好!谢 英语四级提纲式作文写作步骤及技巧相关内容,希望能够帮到大家。
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(四级作文要求)写关于“校园安全”的。帮忙列个中文写作提纲,具体到某些点的,有些英语佳句进去更好!谢
引用
东方 的 【考试信息】2010年6月份大学英语四级考试作文最新预测--校园安全与生活压力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加,校园安全问题备受关注
2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题,提纲第2点要求提供解决办法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题,校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。
【参考范文】
Campus Security
Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying. In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?
On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。
In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。(总结观点段)
一篇关于校园治安,校园安全的英语作文
Electric door guard sparks debate (CRI)
The electric door guard has replaced the traditional "door lady" in a dormitory at Shanghai Songjiang University City, within the range of many universities.
In the future, more electric door guards will take the place of "door ladies."
The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding student's name, major, grade, and even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a "digital eye" to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week.
With the new "door guard" already on duty, students began to discuss the pros and cons of the latest renovation to their dorm in community forums.
Some complained that having to take their IC card everywhere is inconvenient, adding that the system is not always reliable. They noted times when the system failed to recognize them and they had to call repair workers to fix it.
Others say the former "door lady" was more flexible and gave them a sense of "home." Sometimes when a student had to stay out late, to study or for other business, the door lady would wait for them and let them in if they told her beforehand. Or when students' parents came to visit, the door lady would let them in. But now, all of these conveniences seem impossible.
Still, students admit that the electric door guard is much safer, as it prevents thieves as well as unwelcome salesmen from entering their dorm. In this way, the electric door guard has its own advantages.
The school's authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the inconveniences brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to be good for students living in the dorm building.
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跟最近那些在校园发生的事有关的英语作文,字数略少,大家自己补齐!
Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.
Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.
From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识
审题概述�
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
【范文】
l Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important one. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked outside a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
第一段思路点评:
陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
语言点提示:
it seems that此句型表示一种可能性
第二段思路点评:
说明被盗原因
语言点提示:
(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识
(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕
(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
第三段思路点评:
阐述如何加强防盗意识
语言点提示:
注意关联词语in the first place,besides,In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。
考四级先写作文还是后写
1. 四级为什么要先写作文
建议考生把英语四级考试的作文答题时间分成三部分。
1.准备时间(5分钟)
如果没有充分的准备,看完作文题目就直接动手写,会让考生写到最后无话可说。俗话说得好:磨刀不误砍柴工。所以,何不分出一点时间让自己好好的思考改怎么写呢?
在这充足的5分钟内,先审题,看清题目要求,免得写偏题了。然后进行一个提纲和内容的构思,想清楚自己文章的大致结构,是否需要举例说明等等。
2.撰写时间(20分钟)
在正式写作的时候,也要注意以下几点:
(1)如无把握,宁愿写简单句也不写长难句。
(2)卷面整洁。清晰明了的段落和结构、工整的字迹会给阅卷老师留下深刻的正面印象;如果一不小心写错单词,千万不要涂黑,一笔划掉就好。
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3.检查时间(5分钟)
由于考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制,考生写作的时候会出现很多问题,于是这就需要在写完后进行一个检查了。主要检查以下三个点:
(1)拼写是否正确。看文章中是否有拼错的单词、多余的符号和写掉的介词等等。
(2)用词和搭配是否正确。
(3)语法是否正确。主要是人称、时态、语态是否正确,有没有出现本应用过去时态却用的是现在时,动词的三人称单复数是否用正确了。
2. 英语四级考试是不是先写作文和阅读,时间到了就收答题卡
英语四级考试是要先写作文的,写完作文后才会放听力,听力结束以后立刻收答题卡。
考试流程时间如下:
8:50---9:00试音时间
9:00---9:10播放考场指令,发放作文考卷
9:10取下耳机,开始作文考试
9:35---9:40重新戴上耳机,试音寻台,准备听力考试
9:40开始听力考试,电台开始放音
9:40---10:05听力考试
10:05---10:10听力考试结束后(停止答题)收答题卡一(即作文和听力)
10:10---11:25继续考试,完成剩余考试
11:25全部考试结束。
扩展资料
1、成绩公布。根据往年全国大学英语四、六级考试成绩公布时间间隔,一般成绩会在考试结束后的66天左右公布。
2、成绩查询。大学英语四级和六级成绩查询方式:考生可以通过网上免费查分和收费短信查分两种方式进行。
3、考试目的。推动大学英语教学大纲的贯彻执行,对大学生的英语能力进行客观、准确的测量,为提高我国大学英语课程的教学质量服务。
参考资料来源:搜狗百科——英语四级
3. 四级考试时,先放听力还是先写作文
四级考试时,先写作文,后放听力。
主要考试流程如下:
9:00---9:10播放考场指令,发放作文考卷。
9:10取下耳机,开始作文考试。
9:40开始听力考试,电台开始放音。
9:40---10:05听力考试。
10:05---10:10听力考试结束后(停止答题)收答题卡一(即作文和听力)。
10:10---11:25继续考试,完成剩余考试。
扩展资料
题型分布:
1、写作。写作(15%,短文写作)。
2、听力理解。短篇新闻3段(7题),长对话2篇(8题),听力篇章3篇(10题)。
3、阅读理解。包括词汇理解(选词填空 5%),长篇阅读(匹配 10%)和仔细阅读(单项选择 20%)。
4、翻译。汉译英(段落翻译 15%)。
成绩公布:根据往年全国大学英语四、六级考试成绩公布时间间隔,一般成绩会在考试结束后的66天左右公布。
参考资料来源:搜狗百科——英语四级
4. 英语4级 进考场 先写作文还是看听力比较好
四级考试先是考作文,规定时间是30分钟,应该相当充足
审题很重要,根据题目“要求”写
看清楚了是要求,可不能光看个作文题目就写
那样很容易偏题的
切记不要少字数,字数少分数绝对不高的
注意文章结构比例,一般是分三段
背几篇范文,了解文章的大致的框架结构
快速阅读(9:40- 9:55 )
规定时间是15分钟
快速阅读在几篇阅读理解中
是文章简单,题目好做,分数好得
但是时间不好把握,很多人都没时间把是到题目在15分钟内完成
5. 后天要考四级了,有些问题哈~~是先写作文,收作文,然后再发后面的
考试带好学生证,身份证 两个证件。学校发的耳机一般不会不好,你要及时调整,有杂音什么的一定要跟监考老师说换,不能自带的,那是算作弊的。。。。一般四级过了(即425)就可以考六级,但不排除一些学校有比较变态的规定限制。。。听力人品问题,楼主自求多福吧。。。。。
下面是四级流程:
8:50---9:00试音时间。
9:00---9:10播放考场指令,发放作文考卷。
9:10取下耳机,开始作文考试。
9:35发放含有快速阅读的试题册(但9:40才允许开始做)。
9:40---9:55做快速阅读。
9:55---10:00收答题卡一(即作文和快速阅读)。
9:55---10:00重新戴上耳机,试音寻台,准备听力考试。
10:00开始听力考试,电台开始放音。
【楼主参考下~希望对你有帮助~】
6. 英语四级考试写完作文有时间多能不能先写阅读
英语四级考试作文时间如何分配呢?很多考生拿到作文题目之后直接就动笔开写,这是一个误区。
其实30分钟的写作时间绝对绰绰有余,如果直接开写,很容易会造成跑题,或写到一半发现无话可说的现象,导致考生开始绞尽脑汁的编句子,凑字数。 建议考生把英语四级考试的作文答题时间分成三部分。
1.准备时间(5分钟) 如果没有充分的准备,看完作文题目就直接动手写,会让考生写到最后无话可说。俗话说得好:磨刀不误砍柴工。
所以,何不分出一点时间让自己好好的思考改怎么写呢? 在这充足的5分钟内,先审题,看清题目要求,免得写偏题了。然后进行一个提纲和内容的构思,想清楚自己文章的大致结构,是否需要举例说明等等。
2.撰写时间(20分钟) 在正式写作的时候,也要注意以下几点: (1)如无把握,宁愿写简单句也不写长难句。 (2)卷面整洁。
清晰明了的段落和结构、工整的字迹会给阅卷老师留下深刻的正面印象;如果一不小心写错单词,千万不要涂黑,一笔划掉就好。 3.检查时间(5分钟) 由于考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制,考生写作的时候会出现很多问题,于是这就需要在写完后进行一个检查了。
主要检查以下三个点: (1)拼写是否正确。看文章中是否有拼错的单词、多余的符号和写掉的介词等等。
(2)用词和搭配是否正确。 (3)语法是否正确。
主要是人称、时态、语态是否正确,有没有出现本应用过去时态却用的是现在时,动词的三人称单复数是否用正确了。
英语四级提纲式作文写作步骤及技巧
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提纲式作文是历年四、六级考试中最常见的题型。从1995年1月到1999年1月9次四级考试的作文题型都是这种形式。它要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达提纲的主旨。它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段大体的内容,为考生提供了一条思路,稍加思索、计划、整理就可成文。但缺点是如果审题不当,反而容易丢分。另外,它的限定性较大,不理解提纲所展现的内容或词汇,就会感到难以下笔。
一、写作步骤和技巧:
1写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。
2每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次,段落的展开围绕提纲的中心和内容,不能偏离,也不能任意增减。
3提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。这需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。
4收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,即要“扣题”。同时要具有典型性,能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。
二、审题和构思:
根据下题写一篇不少于100词的作文:
my view on job-hopping
1)有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,因为……
2)有些人喜欢经常换工作,因为……
3)我的看法
显而易见,这是一道提纲式的作文题。可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文:
1.分析题目和提纲可知,应该写一篇说明文,当然其中可以夹有议论。要写出“不换工作”和“换工作”的原因,然后给出自己的看法,重点是原因和看法。
2.根据提纲,文章可分3段,第1段是“喜欢从事一种工作”的原因;第2段写出“喜欢经常换工作”的原因;第3段是“我的”看法。
3.根据以上分析,可以把提纲转换为主题句如下:
some people tend to stick to their position all the time.
some people are different.they are in the habit of job-hopping.
i am not in favour of constant job-hopping.
4.以材料支持各段主题句。第1段的材料可以是:喜欢那份工作的各种原因:有发展前途、工资高等;第2段经常“跳槽”的原因:不能施展自己的才能,谋求更高的收入等。第3段也要说明原因,并总结归纳,圆满结尾。
三、参考范文:
my view on job-hopping
some people tend tostick to their positions all the time,as they think the longer one works in a particular field,the more skillful one will be at it.some have been teachers all their lives.some devote all their energy to scientific research.such people love their work and turn out to be specialists in their own fields.they are usually high achievers.
some are different.they are in the habit of job-hopping,for they always purpose what is new and stimulating.they never seem content with their present situations.they like to meetmore people,make more money and new acquaintances,so they hop from job to job.
as far as i am concerned,i am not in favour of constant job-hopping. i believe in a famous proverb,“a rolling stone gather no moss.”i want to be professionally strong.and i respect those who devote themselves to their affectionate jobs throughout
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