批改英语四级作文（求一篇 the most meaningful travel的英语四级作文，120词到180词）

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• 1、批改英语四级作文
• 2、求一篇 the most meaningful travel的英语四级作文，120词到180词
• 3、四级英语作文万能句子

批改英语四级作文

批改者：09 年 12 月 考试，660 分， 作文 132 分
In recent years, more and more large-scale pressure【 pressures，不然后面用 was ，pressure 用单复数都可以。】 were poured on the【the 不用】 college students, flowing【？应该用 reflecting 吧，“反应，说明”】 the importance of huan【human】 resources. We，colleges tudents，realized【must realize，这里应该用一般现在时】 the society that is full of factors of competition, which can hardly step a step into the current society.【这句句法有点问题，建议改为 We , college students , feel obliged to be aware of the fierce competition in society 】

The evil【evil 一般只修饰 devil 吧 …… 太偏激了点……用“serious”好点 】 pressure truly gave 【gives】a prosperitily competative【competitive】 human-resource market for every field in society, hence, there was a age-old saying 【an old saying】 ,which is called "a coin has two sides".【改为 as an old saying quotes,"every coin has its two sides"】 excessive pressure did【does】 really make a "contribution" to the occurence rate of mental disease.for instant, occurence of autism rate are incresinglly happend in graduates. the extramely high rate is of our human-resouce which should be saved for other field as well.

therefore,from my point of view,firstly, to poen【？没有这个词…】 the mental health class can greatly relieve the burden of our competitive environment ,secondly,to do 【to do 改为 doing】 some preworks in the eve of the competative society is also plays a vital
role.

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求一篇 the most meaningful travel的英语四级作文，120词到180词

the most meaningful day
I will never forget that day. Maybe I had enjoy myself a lot of times. But, that day,really changes me. It's (date),my birthday. I got up early. The beautiful presents and delicious cake makes me dreamed all night before. Now, finally, I waited until this day. But things in this year is quiet different.Mom and dad took me out.At first, I thought,maybe they're taking me to the park.But,they drove the car out of the city.I 'm really worried.I want to say something, but my momther and father both look serious.So, I kept quiet. The journey was long and boring. I soon felt asleep.After about 30 minutes,mom waked me up and told me,"We're here.Come down."I got out of the car.There was an old school.It's too old that I can't believe it,till I saw the sign,"XX School.""These are children who are too poor to go to the good schools.And,they're all ophans."said my mom.I looked at them.They looked poor,but when I told them study.Their eyes became bright.Their looked excited.I am really moved. We can study in a fine place.But some of us don't really care about it.But they,they're poor.But they study really hard.And besides,we have our parents. We can feel love all of the time.But they can't.They're ophans.How poor they are! Though that day I didn't play any games.But I can feel from my heart that,we really should do something to take care of the poor people in this world. I will never forget this day.

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1、根据我个人经验……
According to my personal experience，……
2、在这信息的年代…扮演重要的角色。
In the age of information and communication，… plays an important role。
3、 在今日工业社会中?…是生命不可或缺的。
In today‘s industrial society， … is indispensable to life。
4、就我所知?…
As far as my knowledge is concerned，…

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