2013年四级6作文范文 这我写的6月英语四级作文，这我模拟练习的，希望有大神帮忙点评下，作文15分，我这篇能拿几分？

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• 1、2013年12月英语四级真题作文范文
• 2、这我写的2013年6月英语四级作文，这我模拟练习的，希望有大神帮忙点评下，作文15分，我这篇能拿几分？
• 3、2013四级英语作文范文

2013年12月英语四级真题作文范文

作文要求： 金大话英语培训网

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay
based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of
the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't
simply mean learning to obtain information. Your should write at least 120 words
but no more than 180 words. （如图所示，我们看到有一个学生和一个老师正站在教室里。当学生要求做一个随堂测试的时候，他手上拿着手机说到："一旦我知道了如何使用Google，那不就是我所要需要的全部的教育么？"听到了学生这样的问题，老师显得尴尬而又惊讶。）

真题范文：

From the
cartoon given above, we can observe that there is a student and a teacher
standing in a classroom. When given a quiz by his teacher, the little boy says,
with cell phone in his hand that, "once I learn how to use Google, isn't that
all the education I really need?" Having heard her student's question, the
teacher seems to be quite embarrassed and shocked.
We can learn
from the cartoon that the Internet has exerted a great influence on people's
education. One of the most obvious influences is that we can acquire relevant
knowledge and information rapidly and precisely via search engines, professional
websites and online education. The internet has been served as a big school, a
huge library and an informative book. However, education does not simply mean
learning to obtain information. Studying in school, daily communication with
people around us, social activities and fulfilling a task or a project can also
be effective and indispensable forms. They enable us to enrich our knowledge,
broaden our horizons, cultivate skills in communication and practice or even
refine our character.  All of these can not be achieved by the Internet
education alone.
The Internet has exerted a great impact on many
aspects of people' life (of course including education). However, when enjoying
the fruits of it, we should not overlook those traditional, essential and
prevailing forms of education. By the way , do you think that institutions like
shcools or libraries will vanish in the wake of the Internet ? (250
words)

真题范文的参考译文：
我们从这幅图画得知，网络对我们的学习造成了巨大的影响。最大的影响就是获得信息的巨大的便利性。我们可以通过 搜索引擎 、专业的门户网站或者在线教育快速而又精准地获得相关的知识和信息。网络在现代社会已经变成了一个巨大的学校、一座巨大的图书馆或者是一本充满信息的书。然而，教育绝不仅仅意味着学会获取信息。学校的读书上课、与身边的人的日常生活的沟通交流、社会的实践活动以及完成一项任务或项目都是教育的有效而必不可少的形式。它们使我们丰富的知识，扩大的视野，培养交流和实践能力甚至完善性格。而这些，都是搜索信息这样的教育形式所无法达到的。
互联网在生活的各个方面（当然包括教育）产生了巨大的影响。然而，我们在享用它给教育带来的成果的同时，也不能忽视那些传统的、精华的和主流的教育形式。顺便问一句，你觉得学校、图书馆这样的机构会在某一天淹没在互联网的大潮中吗？

（范文来自新东方）

这我写的2013年6月英语四级作文，这我模拟练习的，希望有大神帮忙点评下，作文15分，我这篇能拿几分？

The importance of reading literature（1）

The picture has shown(2) the general problem in our life.The teacher teach us knowledge and skills,but they often ignore that reading literature is also important.

Nowadays students go to school mainly(3) for exams, and thus(4) teachers teach them how to get good grades. Most of them are not emphasized to reading literary works(5), because it is not(6) useful for taking exams(7). However, in my opinion, it is essential to reading literature. For example, A spend all his time on study, so he has good grades. In contrary(8), B often reads literature during holidays. Comparing(9) A to B ,we can find that B would be more confident than A(10), and he will be more easier to reach(11) success than A, Because B knows how to get along with people and how to get a rest in busy life.

From now on,I think teachers(12) should put more stress(13) on reading literature. Literature is to us what water to fish（14）. It can enrich our knowledge. And When we are reading  litareture, we are learning(15) our culture actually.To sum up,all of us shouldn’t ignore reading literature.

1. 拼写啊，大姐，题目抄错了。

2. 不规则动词变过去式

3. mainly大多数，并不是所有人。增加你的词汇广度

4. 三单，加es

5. so没有中文那么常用，改成and thus。

6. not 不是no

7. to改成for表示目的。后边的去e加ing，考试要加复数。

8. 加一个，增加作文亮点。

9. 句首怎么用原型？这里不是祈使句。肯定是去e加ing的。

10. A be more +adj +thanB句型，好好熟悉熟悉，以后大有用处。

11. get 换成reach 好点

12. 中文里说是学校，真正的还是老师，学校是个集合名词。

13. 你用的可以，但是谁应该更注重读文学呢？你没有说明白。改成我的，就不要施动者了。

14. 这是个很好的句型，特殊强调下。你用的是对的，但是fish怎么加es呢?不可数。
    

15. 建议改成learning 不改问题也不大。

可能我有个别字母打错了，不懂就追问。然后满意请采纳！~

2013四级英语作文范文

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The impact of the Internet on learning
Explain why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information
In the age of knowledge explosion, the Internet opens a magical portal for leaners to get access to seemingly incessant information. But is information equal to knowledge? “Once I learn how to use google, isn't that all the education I really need?” This question fully embodies the prejudiced opinion that as long as people acquire abundant information, they will get proper education.
The reason why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information is that education is not limited to the hard facts or theories students can learn from their textbooks or the Internet. It relates to a wider scope ranging from the obtainment of practical skills to the development of characters, which are hard for students to learn simply by googling. Consequently, comprehensive learning in schools that includes learning knowledge, conducting experiments and communicating with peers is what true education is.
In a word, the Internet does provide valuable information for learners, but people should be fully conscious of the essence of education and learn to tell the right from the w
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