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Nowadays,more and more people use credit cards instead of carrying a large AMOUNT OF CASH, 没有说a large of money的，后面也有 Firstly,the people use credit card without a large of money, 不过这句意思上也有点怪 我猜你是说拿了信用卡就不用带大量现金了 首先people 前不用the，when people use credit cards instead of cash,it's more convenient and safe，然后。。。more and more customers use credit cards can reduce...有问题,using吧, ...FOR the workers

第二段的第三行的时态用过去比较好，志愿者组织应该是过去就被建立起来的，所以把are改成were更好，后面的主语是they 所以starts的s去掉或用过去时started.

最后一段倒数第三行的disable是动词，要用disabled形容词。估计你是笔误。

" Mute English"among Chinese students

A phenomonon of "Mute English"appears among Chinese students because they can't TALK IN English to with their classmates ,friends and foreigners.

There are two reasons for this situation.First ,most of Chinese students STUDY English for their examinationS ,they pay more attention to written testS and neglect of spoken language .It is a failURE to ChinA'S education .SecondLY ,many Chinese students are so shy and unconfident in English class THAT they always LISTEN carefully ,but not put up their hands to answer teacher's questions .

If the Chinese students solve this problem ,as I see it ,they must cover the following points:first ,don't study hard for examiationS,but FOR the konwledge; secondLY,they should pay attention to spoken lanuage ; AT last,if they meet the foreigner in A supermarket or A restaurant ,they should talk with the foreign people boldly.金大话英语培训网

In a word,learning English or another foreign lanuage is AN interesting THING ,not a burden.WE shouldn't study only for examinationS.