英语四级写作范例之对网络教育的原因及评价（12月英语四级话题作文赏析）

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Topic 9 Online Education

1.目前网络教育形成热潮

2.我认为这股热潮的原因是……

3.我对网络教育的评价

Online Education

Nowadays，online education has become very popular among people. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV，the past five years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who has received this kind of education to an astonishing number of 9 , 745 , 000.

To account for this phenomenon，people have come up with various reasons listed below. To begin with compared with having classes at school，online education saves our time，energy and money， especially to those who are too busy to study full-time. What's more, the schedule is flexible so that we can have a free choice to study what we need in urgent and decide when，where and how to study.

As far as I am concerned，I appreciate this new form of education and also have got some benefits from it. It's indeed a helpful complement to the traditional education means.(146词)

“一句话”点评

毫无疑问，第一段的CCTV和数据将首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时使用了conduct ,witness, sharp等好词和定语从句，将形成良好的第一印象。

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第一段:描述现象，引人该段中心“目前网络教育形成热潮”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示，更加形象地说明越来越多的人参加网络教育。

第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“这股热潮的原因是”。并用saves our time，energy and money，especially to those who are too busy to study full-time和the schedule is flexible来支持这股热潮的原因。

第三段:直接展现自己观点，并提出简要的一个原因，不做更深层次的展开。

美丽词句

(1)Online education saves our time，energy and money，espedally to those who are too busy to study full-time.网络教育节省我们的时间、精力和金钱，尤其是对那些经常忙于学习的人。(二个名词的并列使用，是文章的一大亮点。)

(2)The schedule is flexible so that we can have a free choice to study what we need in urgent and decide when，where and how to study.精彩句式，含有结果状语从句和并列句式。

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【篇一】2020年12月英语四级话题作文赏析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topicExtravagant Spending on College Campus. Youshould write at least 120 words, and base yourcomposition on the outline below:

1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高，根本没有节俭的概念，

2)分析产生这一现象的原因，

3)我的看法。

【范文】

Extravagant Spending on College Campus

According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student hasbeen on the sharp rise. Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind. Theytake it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.

First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families. They arethe apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. In addition, withthe improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money.Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.

From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardlessof their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our futuredevelopment.

【篇二】2020年12月英语四级话题作文赏析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic SocialPractice of College Students. You should write atleast 120 words, and base your composition on theoutline below:

1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动，

2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处，

3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么。

【范文】

Social Practice of College Students

Nowadays a large number of universitiesencourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During theholidays, students in mounting numbers choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, ortake part in other practical activities alike. It is obvious that social practice is playing anincreasingly essential role in China’s college education.

Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice. Above all, they areprovided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside campus. What is more, insocial practice activities, students can apply their theoretical knowledge to the solution to thepractical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. Besides, social practice helpsstrengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.

Considering the above-mentioned, it is necessary for college students to participate insocial practice. However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, somestudents spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. Hence, weshould try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.

【篇三】2020年12月英语四级话题作文赏析

A Letter of Condolence

你在报纸上看到你的朋友王志的家乡被飓风袭击，请你写一封慰问信向他表示你的关心。

【范文】

A Letter of Condolence

Dear Wang,

In today’s newspaper, I read about the recent events in your town and I am writing to extend my deepest condolences.

It broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. I am really worried about you and your family, and all your friends there. I am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.

I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support. Our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to America. I donated all my allowance that I have been saving for years.

I feel extremely sorry for this tragedy, and I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Please pass my concern on to your parents.

Yours sincerely,

Meng Fei

分析列举式

具体表述如下：

人们喜欢参观博物馆，分析一下都有什么原因? 你认为一个好邻居应该有哪些品质?有人搬到你们城市，你认为他会对这个城市有些什么看法?

两种模板：

1._________的.确是一个值得探讨的话题。不同的人有不同的看法，有的认为______，有的认为____________，还有的认为____________我认为最重要的一点是____________.

第一段：

There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a hot topic which is much talked about [not only by ____________, but also by ____________ /by people across the world/ in a modern society].

或：There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).

或：There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a basic (moral/philosophical) problem that can not be circumvented by anybody,( because the opinion on this problem will determine one’s attitude toward the world and the life).

或：(如果是针对某一事件的题目，不是什么popular topic)____________(Why people visit museums) is a interesting question that deserves careful investigation not only by_______________(museum managers), but also by ____________(visitors themselves). People with different experience, life style and [emotional concerns / educational background/____________] differ greatly in their attitudes toward this [problem /question]. Some people hold the opinion that ____________. Others, [however/on the contrary], maintain that ____________. Still others, convinced by the view that ____________, argue that ____________. According to them,____________. But as far as I am concerned, I consider the [chief reason/ most important quality] is ____________. And here are three reasons that I’d like to point out.

第二段：第一点第二点第三点

第三段：

In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main opinions on ____________ hold by [common/most] people. But my idea is that ____________________, and I sincerely believe that it is right.

2.____________的确是一个值得探讨的话题。人们看法比较一致，第一第二第三。我认为最重要的一点是____________

第一段:

第一句同1。第二句：

Somewhat surprisingly, people with different experience, life style and [emotional concerns / educational background/____________] share similar attitudes toward this [problem/question]. They usually [give some, even all of the following reasons / consider some, even all of the following points [important/ necessary / desirable /advisable] ].

第二段：

第一点第二点第三点

第三段：In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main [reasons /desirable qualities /____________] of ____________. But as far as I am concerned, I consider the [ chief reason/ most important quality] is ____________.

或：In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main opinions on ____________ hold by [common/most] people. But in my point of view, ____________ has more advantages than disadvantages under most circumstances.

通用句型：(并不固定在某个模板中，在每个模板中都可以用到)

This may explain why ____________/As a consequence____________

It goes without saying that____________

In fact, we can observe easily that in modern society,____________

As a proverb says, "Everything has two sides".

As a proverb says, "Where there is a will there is a way".

As is known to all, "No pains, no gains."

Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context. In today’s world,____________

I can say that if you have no experiences like these, your life is an inadequate one.

be of great benefit/damage to sb./sth.

The reason of ____________ is not so much ____________ as ____________

People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people hold the opinion that ____________ Others, [ however/on the contrary], maintain that ____________.

It is [urgent/necessary/convenient/desirable/advisable] for sb. to do sth.

have [trouble/a difficult time] [in doing sth./with sth.]

举例证：It can be given by a (well known/concrete) example that ____________. / In order to see this point clearly, let us to see an example:____________/To illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive:____________.

第一点原因：

The main/first reason is that ____________.

First, we can observe easily that in modern society, ...

In the first place

To begin with, (a good roommate should ____________)

第二点原因：

Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that ____________.

[The second/another] reason for [my/people’s] propensity for A is that ____________

[The second/another] desirable quality for a good roommate is that ____________

第三点原因：

Moreover,____________

The third reason, [not the last/however], goes this way: ____________

写完三条原因还可以再写：Maybe there are some other reasons( to show____________). But

it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.

最后意犹未尽或者字数不够可以加这么一句：

Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the additional convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life.

一个使用了模板的例子：

对立观点：

In this modern society, people always confront the dilemma of choosing whether AAA or BBB. This problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in his or her daily life. People may prefer one to the other although some may have no opinions about either at all. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments on both sides.

It is quite rational for average people to choose BBB because of the obvious reason that 原因.The most extreme manifestation of this idea is the fact that 例子.Even so, however, many advantages of BBB over AAA will be obscured by its considerable drawbacks such as 例子.Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. Moreover, a close scrutiny of the potential benefits of choosing AAA would reveal how flimsy it is to stick to the propensity to BBB over AAA.

There are numerous reasons for my preference for AAA, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones. One chief reason is that 原因一.And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the fact that 例子一. The above is only part of the important aspects, and another one with equal significance with respect to choosing between the two lies in the development of the proposition that 原因二. This well explains the undeniable fact that 例子二. Besides, a further reason why I advocate AAA is that 原因三.This may explain why 例子三.

Last but not least, there is also a more practical reason why I would choose AAA, that is 原因四.

All in all, taking into account all these merits that AAA boasts of, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the advantages of AAA outweigh any benefit we can get from BBB and choosing AAA is a rather wise decision.